I would recommend not using a quotation in your full-sentence outline. If you MUST, then of course you'll need to cite it.

You may need to narrow your topic down. What are you going to focus on about technology?

Illegal drug smuggling in the United States

The sentence doesn't really make sense at all. Not sure of your meaning, but you could try, "During the presidency of , many immigrants arrived hoping for a chance to make something out of their lives."

The conclusion needs to stick with someone. If not changing their min about the subjuct a reader should be rethinkinh there own decision.

As if it were APA, I started with my thesis statement and I labled it Full Sentence Outline.

Most of it should still fowwow the APA Guidlines and thrn use the Roman numeral.

I just label the heading "Sentence Outline" then following the roman numerals?

No. The reference page does not count.

No it does not

yes, it does

A thesis statement is one sentence, put at the end of your introductory paragraph, which can be 2 or 3 sentences. It must be the last sentence of your opening paragraph.

At least two sentences

one clear consise sentence of 25 words or less

3 arguments or counterarguments

Not an excessive amount

ROUGH DRAFT REMINDERS

A rough draft is sample and practice of what the real paper will look like without all the corrections to it.

A outline of examples of what you will highlight on

a non formal writing of the term paper.

a non formal writing example of what you will write on the assignment given.

Depends on your instructor, honestly. My instructor supports doing so, but only from a third party perspective...don't say "I", say "the author" once experienced a situation of this sort and......(cont.) then, it is okay...3rd party perspective!!!

You can not add personal information to your paper its your research only. a personal view would also influnece a readers thoughts.

No it is not okay

No I would not.

No I would not think that would be appoite in this case.

I think that it would be alright

Yes, it would be helpful to convey the message

Yes I believe that it would be ok if done tastefully

gun control

healthcare reform

on healthcare reform

on going green

make a rough draft of your sentance outline and revise it

on gun control

gun control

It is about education

I am having troblem starting my introduction

topic to start out literacy

using your outline for topic sentances of each paragraph

It is up to you if you want to include your conclusion, your outline is for your help.

It is up to you if you want to add your conclusion to your outline. But if your instructor wants you to then you have no choice but to add it. I personally do not add my conclusion to my outline, but I do put in my introduction.

no it is not needed after every senatnce

no

Show me a sentence outline

No. You put your citing source information either at the beginning, or at the end of the paragraph, if the paragraph is from the same source.

no

I think you should have an intraducing sentence first and a closing sentnce that explains your citation?

source date page editor and publisher

source, date, page, editor, publisher

Eliminate the background information of the source (i.e.: author's background)

by creating a paragraph

No, that would be adding your full sentence outline to your paper.

No, when writing a rough draft, you are writing your research paper roughly.

No, when you write your rough draft it is not necessary to add roman numerals at the beginning. If you are going to use your rough draft as a guide and your not submitting your rough draft to your instructor then you can use roman numerals to help you. But otherwise do not put them in in rough draft.

no

no

No

no

yes

no

with the paragraph

It would appear after the paragraph, with using the paragraph as an introduction to the pictures.

it goes with the paragraph

review outline and thesis to help focus on main points of topic

Use an outline style to bring the facts and main points in order, then re-apply in a paragraph form

Find the fact that are important to your thesis so your story can be eye catching to your readers, as for your main points also include vital information for your readers.

I also split the URL into two lines taking out the hyperlink when I do so.

copy and paste into reference page

change the font size to fit; or type the url on a separate page, save it as a PDF format, then copy (screen shot) the format back into the page your work is on.

I split up the url to maintain the format...it isn't always possible to keep the address on one line, but you can maintain format by splitting the url address between two lines. :)

no, introduction and thesis is one paragraph, followed by the body of the paper, wrapping up paper with the conclusion by restating thesis or topic of paper.

Yes

Your intro comes in first paragraph with the thesis found usually at the end. And your body includes the supporting paragraphs, usually three supporting topics. The conclusion is a closing paragraph summarizing the paper.

leave the paper for a couple of hours - then review to see where information can be added or elaborated on.

Without using rhetorical statements, and fallacies, go back to your findings and include areas into paragraphs that can give greater support to your paper.

Do a mind-map on a sheet of paper before you start off writing. It will help give ideas and make you hit the word mark.

select items with cursor and backspace or use delete key.

Put the entire research findings into your own words. Writing the same information in a "backwards" form (start at the end of the statement, and reword towards the beginning)

highlight and then click on cut

proof read it

the only initial inconvenience is the time it take to put one together.

When the sub-topics are about a different subject that does not support the initial subject (first line)

Full-sentence outlines are beneficial in all areas. However, they are time consuming. It may be easier to write a topic outline, but in the end a full-sentence outline is worth the work

Absolutely, this is the most important part of the paper and it helps when staying on topic.

No. Your thesis statement is the "Topic" you are writing about... The Story
The outline contains all the information that brings your story together.

Your thesis should be at the top of the outline. Example:
Thesis: Write Thesis Here
I.Main Point
A.Sub-point
1.Supporting

Yes it is the topic of the paper.

The point of view to convince readers to accept a subject.

It is what follows the method.

Drug Abuse, also known as substance abuse, involves the repeated and excessive use of chemical substances to achieve a certain effect.

To let your audence know what you are writing about in one sentance

At the end, or near the ending of the introduction.

It will be the last sentence of the introductory paragraph.

end of intro

The thesis is the last sentence in the introduction.

end of the intro

end of the intro

end of intro

It goes at the end of the intro.

Remove the background information of the source and place in the proper alphabetical order on the reference page; by author's last name.

take away the summaries

Make sure that your references are in alphabetical order and that all your sources is all related to the thesis staement.

Check with hospitals about concerns and benefit to apply together; check with insurance companies about benefits.

The word, "introduction" should not be included.

no

Neither of the words "introduction" or "conclusion" should appear in the paper.

no,

no

no

Taking each line; beginning with the main sentence (roman numeral), then complete the remaining paragraph with the remaining sentences, in addition to including other supporting sentences to complete between 3-5 sentences for each paragraph.

By using each line sentance one at a time and biulding on to it.

By using the Schools website, you can download the format and turn it into a template in your own computer.

Go to MS WORD,click new.Input APA in the search bar. Once the template appears,highlight by clicking the APA doc you want, then download. Hope this is helpful.

MS Word 2007 has it built into the software. Again, you can also purchase at a discount (90% off) through the University of Phoenix.

the APA website has one you can purchase

if you have a newer version of Microsoft word it could help you with APA formatting

Separate each section that relates to the main subject - Read each sub-section at different times and settings to be sure that it contains the right support for your thesis and topic. Record yourself reading it. Then play it back a couple of days later when your alone and see if it sounds like it flows correctly.

Read it over and over agin at different times. Also, try having someone else read it and give their opinion.

No. You are limited to quote (quota) and a percentage of cited material.

No because most APH papers can only contain 20 or 30% of citied material

Drug abuse comes in many forms, for example, one of the most popular forms of drug abuse today is through prescription drugs.

explain what is considered prescription drug abuse

Apply only the information of the author, year of publication writing, title, source and location. And place in alphabetical order under the author's last name.

alphabetize your references and lose the summaries

In the Center of Writing Excellence; when you submit a paper for CWE review.

The plagiarism checker sould be available in your student library.

IN the university Library under CWE

student library

Yes, with appropriate reference and citings. However, personal interviews do not require listing on the reference page, but does require citing in the text.

Yes however you must reference these people and cite them within your paper as well.

An argument that can be used against the position you are supporting.

a statement in opposition to an argument that is being made within a written document.

he, her, she, their, etc.

He, she, they... their

the---, people, the subjest

Begin with the main sentence (roman numeral), the follow along by adding each additional sub-topic afterwards. Each "roman numeral" section is turned into one paragraph.

It is not necessary, however it is good to use for keeping your stages of work in order through your completed paper.

yes

No

No.

no

yes

Must gather resources alfabetically decide which ones are most important, make sure to correctly cite them as a journal, book, news paper or encyclapedia. write a summary under the cited material.

My suggestion would be to start on your thesis, your conclusion, and even begin on your body outline. Submit examples to your facilitator and follow up frequently until you get an answer.

I think this is a very good topic, you could ask someone that has being in this situation before, there are many female around the world going through this and sometime it not, because they want to be there, there are many issues involve such as economic,place to live,or afraid of how going to support themself or if they have kid how they going to provide food or shelter, or sometimes getting more hurt if the husband or boyfriend find out she want to run away, to many people it sound stupid but domestic violence don't start right away, it start playing with someone mind first a psycologycal thing, then is like a game playing with the face then some punch and when you not even know how or when the domestic violence it got worst, normally the person did not know she is in it. I think the first thing that a person should do is admited that they going through this and then make the decision of leave this behind. there are many intitution that help the victims and hotlines, secure shelter to provide help. I hope this give an extra idea for your research paper. Good Luck!

Perhaps it would be best to focus on what you want to write about in terms of domestic violence. Place the strongest arguments in the center of the body of your paper and remember to follow all of the advice your course gives on formatting as well as all of the lessons given to help you outline and create the body of your paper.

MAYBE YOU NEED TO CHANGE YOUR TOPIC TO SOMETHING THAT IS NOT SO BROAD.

Yes. Every effect that can be placed upon a child at birth, pre-birth, and through the growth of the child.

Yes, that is very important o the effects that a meth lab has on a living individual.

Yes you can. It is pertinent to your topic and can actually be used to broaden the reader's understand of the severity of the issue at hand.

The author's last name would be placed in the beginning. Example: "According to Smith (insert year in parenthasis)..."
Other examples include paraphrasing then include the author and year in parenthesis at the end (Smith, XXXX).
Or you can use a simple quote, again beginning with the author and year (XXXX), then the short quote, followed by the specific citing: (p.vi).

These are done the same way as the initial argument. You start with a roman numeral, then include the back-up facts underneath like sub-topics.

The roman numberal section will begin your paragraph, the sub-topics are the body of support. You can even include something at the end of each paragraph that will open (introduce) the next paragraph.

My paper will include tables of referencing information and pictures. These will assist the reader for better understanding. Each one will be either in the surrounding area of the subject.

The roman numeral "I" would be introducing the product (prescription drug abuse), and who, with why and how it affects (teens & college students towards addictive habits). Then under this section you indent each fact that supports your roman numeral I section.

Look at webites like DEA and DAWN, then search specific statistics. Use the library and search those keywords.

Two ways:
1. Copy and Paste the reference line (above the description paragraph, or bibliography), and put that (copy) section alphabetically into the order (by author last name), where it appropriately fits.

Thorough criminal checks and interviews, stricter prevention can maintain gun control.

While Even though taking medication can alleviate pain, the pain of with-drawling the drug is worse, prescription medication can become dependent.

Even though immigration is causing over population and taking away some jobs, the support of proper immigration reform and ways to effectively incorporate immigrants into the American society could be of great benefit to America. If properly incorporated in society, immigrants can be held accountable for being able to reap the benefits of living in our country.

although outsourcing brings feelings of fear and confusion, the act of moving unskilled positions overseas allows products to be created and sold cheaper here in the states or globally. By offshore outsourcing labor, a company can use the money saved for innovation and create new and better approaches to their current products or create new products altogether.

Cohabitating allows you to know the flaws of your partner before the exchange of vows. Which if rushed into, and not fully knowing your partner can result into divorce.

One would need to list topic, and categorize each item in full sentences.

There are many benefits when it comes to writing full sentence outlines, rather than just typing the paper. If someone were to ask, "wouldn't it be simpler to just write your paper than to create a full-sentence outline." I would respond with, "no".
Firstly, writing a full sentence outline is extremely important in order to begin formatting the paper. One reason is for clarity. It is important to be able to structure full sentenced, that will be put into full paragraphs. By starting with the sentences it makes the formulation of the paragraphs much easier. In addition, by writing out the sentences in a outline formation it allows the writer to see each and every sentence by itself.
Secondly, outlining the sentences will assist with the way in which the final paper will flow. By writing out the sentences seperately, that allows the writer to see if the sentencing all connects logically. By looking at each sentence it is much easier for the writer and the editor to see how the sentences will flow once they are put into paragraphs. Full sentence outlines will also lead to greater efficiency in writing. This will allow for a much easier way to edit your paragraphs. If the sentences are not in paragraph forms, it is much easier to edit and rearrange when necessary. This method is more efficient, because it is much faster to rearrange sentences, rather than entire paragraphs. Furthermore, this method will most importantly help with time management.
Organization is key and once the writer has established the clarity, efficiency, and flow the merging of the sentences into paragraphs and then into a final paper will come much easier and be less time consuming.
In order to turn the full sentence outline into the body of a rough draft it would be important to ensure that all the full sentences flow and connect. Each sentence that will end a paragraph, must flow into the new paragraph and this is vitally important in order to have a complete rough draft. Another way to turn the outline into the body of the rough draft will be to organize all of the sentences in logical order. It is important to review each sentence and ensure that they will be able to follow one another. Once it is established that all of the sentences can fit together, then I would have to establish which sentences would fit in each paragraph. Lastly, I would have to create an introduction and conclusion and ensure that the in between paragraphs fit well with those two paragraphs.
When writing, it is important to develop methods to assist in making writing easier. Full sentence outlines are a great way to establish all of the elements needed to create a well flowing, complete paper.

One would need to take information from outline and add more information to make paper longer so it flows together.

I. Poverty has a direct affect on America’s literacy rates.
A. Increased literacy is another way to reduce poverty.
1. Statistics show that job opportunities can improve providing literacy rates increase.
2. Devastating crisis in America causing poverty has caused literacy rates to decrease.
B. Literacy is decreased when America has devastating crisis.
1. When families experience situations that don’t allow their children to stay in a school system on a consistently basis this has an affect on children’s literacy, because they aren’t able to continue to their learning process.
II. In order for children to have successful literacy rates they must be able to rely on parents and teachers.
A. Children rely on parents for support when learning how to read.
1. Parents must be willing to spend time with their children and encourage them to read because this wills how the concern for the child’s education.
2. Parents have to be educated on the fact that it is never too early to read to their children and introduce them to books, because this will enhance their literacy awareness.
B. Teachers influences are needed to help children understand that they can read.
1. Teachers are very helpful in the learning process of children reading because children spend a lot of time with teachers.
2. It is very important for teachers to communicate properly with parents because all parents might not know how to help their children with reading.
III. There are many factors that determine the literacy rate in America.
A. More than half of our state and federal prisons are illiterate.
1. Students who decide to drop out of school tend to have problems reading, this put them in a venerable position to get in trouble with the law.
2. When inmates are provided with literacy help they are less likely to return to prison, because they are now able to seek better job opportunities.
B. Despite the fact that some people may argue immigrants who enter in the U.S. is a big factor on the literary rate in America.
1. It makes it difficult to teach immigrants how to read when they don’t fluently speak their original language.
2. When immigrants come to the U.S. without being able to speak English this affects their children’s education as well because they have to get their children in enrolled in school and assist with homework.

No, because you need to avoid biases in the body of your paper.

I think it should be in the introduction of the paper.

Your outline should consist of three to four main points.

At least four to five categories.

I would think one could if they have info. that goes with the questions.

I think it would look like a regular research paper.

One would take info. and add more to it so it flows together and makes sense.It needs to fit together with topic sentence also.

Ask yourself, "Who, what when why, where and How," in relation to your topic. Your opening outline should not be a problem.

Pick out key info. and build on that to make outline.

Although it is "your personal experience," an alternative can be stated as a description of something; not so much as making the person who experienced the main subject, but making the main topic the researched reference.
Does that make sense?

so we can't even use "you" in the paper?

One would think it would be okay if they are writing about a personal experience.

I asked my instructor that very question and her advice was to combine sentences together in creative ways to minimize the first person.

I'm not sure, but using the third-person style (I think).

You can use I, we, us, etc. in your introduction.

They. Them.

One could use one, oneself, he, she.

i'm not 100% sure, but maybe you could use the person's name. for example: Jane Smith is woman with strong communicational skills.

"Myself" refers to "Me."

Yes, myself is first person.
The word "my" refers to your self.

It's first person

it is a first person word

first

Outlines begin with a single subject (I am a smoker). This is your Roman Numberal I. What I smoke, How long I have been a smoker; Why I smoke, etc., will be the outline supports that follow below that roman numeral line. Hope that makes sense.

Think about the main topics you wish to discuss. Use those topics as main points for your paper. Elaborate from there.

one needs to start with an introduction.

you need to start with a introduction, like a qote.

Expository essays are non-biased and are mainly evidential information of facts. It contains no personal opinion.

it is the person opinion and bias on the subtest.

Not sure if I understand the question. However the thesis statement is a sentence in the introductory paragraph. The "gathered within" throws me off. Sorry.

No, it is designed to summarize a research paper. It's one's argument.

A thesis can not be contain in a sentence because it is a complete statement designed to summarize research in the paper.

Outlining is structuring the supportive information that will give facts to both your introduction and your conclusion. It will also bring everything together in one solid flow of order.

Outlining does not include the introduction or the conclusion.

Outlining the body of your paper gives you an advantage to properly structure your paper for the reader.

Only outlining the body of the paper does not include the introduction or conclusion section of the paper.